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swasdiva 2006-07-07 ID: 552
I really like the angle you took with the Inuyasha/Kikyo secret-rendevous scenario. Too many people have Kagome wandering into a homemade hanyou-zombie porn and then running away in tears. Everytime I read a scene like that I can't help but picture the art-geek-turned-prom-queen girl from 'Not Another Teen Movie' flailing her arms around like an albatross. But I digress. My point is that you've instantly made the scenario not only interesting but almost...lewd, or more carnal, more clandestine...how do I put this...you've captured the dishonesty in desire, the *adulterous* quality of Inuyasha and Kikyo. Instead of him having all the scruples of a frat-boy, he's well aware this his obsession and decision reeks (literally) of *affair*. Your treatment of this relationship is steamier than what's normally found in fanfics, and I hope that tone transgresses into Kagome's interaction with Kurama. There's something so sinfully alluring about a relationship kept secret, when your heart can't choose between duty and desire, and begins to forget the difference.

Oooh!!! Can't wait for super-mega-watt-hotness of Kags/Kurama!!! I wonder, though...will is begin in the future since she'd most likely have better success at keeping it a secret, or will Youko make an appearance? Either way, I'm fascinated and can't wait to read more!!

   Bloodcherry vmgkero@hotmail.com 2006-07-09 ID: 556
This story is very interesting so far and I loved the way Kags took the jewel back from Youko! I started laughing! REALLY! I mean, Youko-THE Youko Kurama- got bitten on his own game! Now THAT must have been a HUGE blow on his massive ego! XD I hope you can update soon!! =D
Ja ne,
Bloodcherry

   LadyTsuki 2006-07-09 ID: 557
I loved this !!! I hope you haven't stopped working on it and will update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

   swasdiva (not signed in) spacecataz25@yahoo.com 2006-07-19 ID: 560
Ho....lyy......

Hands down, this is the best Youko/Kagome//Kurama fic I've ever read. Period. And I have a Guiness Book of World Records entry for "Most Read Youko/Kagome/Kurama" fics. Seriously. This. Fic. Is. Amazing. It's well-written, well-paced, inventive, engaging, and oh yes, I utterly adore it.

Please keep this one going!!!

   swasdiva spacecataz25@yahoo.com 2006-07-19 ID: 561
Oh look, I already reviewed this once before! Well, apparently I'm still smiten!!

   swasdiva (not signed in) spacecataz25@yahoo.com 2006-08-22 ID: 582
I...freaking love...this fic!!!! (that's a song, ya know) I'd write something infinitely more profound but I'm drowning in sleepiness. Another amazing chap.

   Anon 2006-10-14 ID: 610
I LOVE IT WRITE MORE!!!!

   Anon 2006-10-15 ID: 612
PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE THIS FANFIC IT IS THE BEST I HAVE READ SO FAR IN THIS LIBRARY!!!

   joykIkjoy 2006-10-28 ID: 624
your fic ROCKS HARD. THAT'S ALL i HAVE TO SAY..jOy OuT!

   kawaii-miko 2006-11-03 ID: 634
how cute update soon

chibikaggy 2006-11-26 ID: 653
This fan fic is the best that I`ve read. I can`t wait for the next chapter. [:

   Anon 2006-11-30 ID: 655
AHH!! fabulous story....i love this pairing, but i have such a hard time finding any decent stories....please, please update soon!

swasdiva 2007-01-11 ID: 693
Freakin' GREAT, as always. GAH! I love Youko/Kagome but you're right, I still got a soft spot for traditional Inu/Kagome. And now, thanks to Kikyo...as always...it will all go to crap.

...

Threesome, anyone?

~_^ HAHA! J/J

...

or not.

   passionate crow rat 2007-01-17 ID: 696
noooooooooooooo why did you stop!

darkmoonlight 2007-01-23 ID: 701
I've been following the story since it came out. It's awesome! Keep up the good work :)

   Faye icestormedrose@yahoo.com 2007-02-26 ID: 723
Hi! Wow, that was awesome! I just read all 16 chapters, and I just have to say I LOVE this story! I love the way Yoko and Kurama interact with Kagome so naturally! I hope Kagome gets over Inuyasha soon. Kurama is a MUCH better match! Yoko is so sweet and so naughty at the same time! *smiles* And Kurama is such a gentleman! Together they're perfect! *giggles* Yusuke is such a trip! LOL With all those not-so-subtle hints about Kurama and Hiei! I can't wait to see what happens at the engagement party!

   Kri10 Kri10washere@yahoo.com 2007-03-18 ID: 740
Just a little hint, how u spelled Kayko was wrong it's K-E-I-K-O. Don't worry i get it confused too, just a helpful little hint. BTW i love this fic!!!!! Yusuke's response was greatness!

   DeathNoteMaker lil_anbu_naruto@hotmail.com 2007-04-03 ID: 745
I love this story so far! It has been a while since I have reac anything on this website and I might even start posting stories on here! I love KuraKag!

   kookookitty ginduf@gmail.com 2007-04-26 ID: 761
i just found you!!

it's an epic tale!

i like the interactions, it would be nice if yasha could get a clue... seems he's mellowing a bit though.

your descriptions, the scenery, the personalities etc make this story come alive. i am quite curious where you are going to take this next, and i eagerly anticipate your futuer installments.

thank you,
ginny

giovannag 2007-05-02 ID: 795
i like it! Update soon!

swasdiva 2007-07-04 ID: 879
Sweet Sassafras, why have I ignored this fic for so long??? Life does that sometimes, and then there are nights when I'm off for holidays and I can spend it reading the fabulousness that is this GLORIOUS fic. I swear to you...no really, I swear on all that is holy, you have he most perfect way with words I've ever encountered. Your turn of phrase - each sentence - is crafted in a way that leaves me astounded. Your descriptive voice is so original it's baffling. Every metaphor makes me pause because I can't wrap my head around how well it's written. Your writing style is worthy of a professional author.

Okay, all worshiping of your style aside, I prostrate (not the gland, the bow) myself at the pitch-perfection of your characterizations. The plot dances along at a steady pace. It's romantic and real, angsty but tender. Each chappie makes me glow inside. You have, what I think, is the best take on the Youko/Kagome/Kurama pairing in all the fandom I've experienced. This story is a jewel unto itself and your brilliant writing makes it come alive with sweeping vigor. Not everyone can say they write with sweeping vigor, but dammit biznatch! (or should that be viznatch? vixen...get it?...I'm lame...*-_-) You've got it!

Alright...I can't think of anything else to say, so I'll just end here. This story always leaves me with a little trill of joy in my heart, which is corny, but true. Amazing work, as always, and I can't wait to read further installments.

BTW...YOKO + KAGoME 4 EvA!!!! WHAT!!!

   update 2007-08-17 ID: 911
please update, i really want to know what happens next with this lovely story.
your doing an amzing job and this story can go sooooo far if you would jsut continue it.
please update soon!!!!!!

   swasdiva spacecataz25@yahoo.com 2007-08-25 ID: 912
Holy cow...a chapter dedication?? *_*!!! I don't really know if I deserve that, because all I said was true, but thank you!! *-_-* blushing!! Having caught up on the latest chappies, I can say you're still at the top of your game. I seriously don't know how you do it, but you know *just how* to describe every detail so that I can *experience* what the characters feel. Reading this fic still leaves me starry-eyed, with the romance, the plot and your writing style. That said, the plot is *certainly* starting to rear its ugly head, isn't it? Koenma and Botan have some 'splainin' to do!! And who are the youkai plotting to hurt Keiko and now Kagome??? O_O!! Too much drama, and I loves it!!

I do have a little question, though, and it has more to do with some YYH info. I never watched to show but got into the crossover fanfiction enough to get the gist. Now...you mention that Kurama not only looked like he could command an army, but that he had experience with that? Are you referring to when he trained Chu and others? The reason I ask is for a story idea I'm developing, and if he has canon experience training armies, that would help me immensely! If there's any episode I can reference, please point me in the right direction!!

Whew! I think that's it for now. I anxiously await more of this amazing story! And as a side note, I'm sorry to hear about your trip cancellation. I can imagine how excited you were...but you get to go next year, right? That's at least a positive to look forward to! Where do you plan to visit?

Okay...NOW I'm done with this heinously long review! ^_^ Great stuff, as always!

   Elehanna Sesshys_girl06@hotmail.com 2007-09-27 ID: 919
omg! i really hope you update soon, i wanna see some lime with Yoko and Kagome in the past....... that would so make my day!!! and I'd probably get better faster too.... *grumbles and mutters about those miserable head colds from hell* well i hope it don't last too long... i don't wanna sneeze and sniffle any more! and my throat is killing me!!! first I'm all stuffed up, then 10 seconds later my nose is running away from me and i have to go catch it!! hopefully another chapter will help me to forget about it...at least for a little while.... right now i about want to keel over and die...oh and there is a new group of singers called celtic woman... they are so pretty!!!! omg!!! i hope you check them out.... my fave song from them is called 'the sky the dawn and the sun" it's a bunch of girls that harmonize together, and it's all crystal clear. there voices are amazing.... i got shivers the first time i heard them... well hope you update soon.


~Elehanna~

   Firedemon86 Firedemon8603@yahoo.com 2007-10-03 ID: 921
OMG! You can't leave us hanging there... That is just tooo EVIL! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I know it's hard to update, but please this just isn't fair! Is that Youko! What happened! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! VERY SOON!!

   Elehanna sesshys_girl06@hotmail.com 2007-10-04 ID: 922
well i sure hope you do like celtic woman! my latest favorite from them is called Caledonia. i find it's really pretty. as well i was wondering if you have heard the gentleman song before, although i doubt it, unless your a Buffy the vampire slayer fan. but anyways, i am going to write the lyrics for you in case you haven't heard it. well here goes...

can't say a word,
can't even cry,
the gentlemen are coming by,
peeking in windows,
knocking on doors,
they need to take 7,
and they might take yours,
can't call for mom,
can't say a word,
your gonna die screaming,
but you won't be heard.

yeah i know... it's short, but when i first heard it being sung, it creeped me out. it's sung by a little girl, that has a very soft voice, also sung very slow, and something close to the tune 'it's raining it's pouring' and for some reason i feel compelled to tell you about something my friend came up with, i don't know where he got it from, but it's funny never the less... we were playing dungeons and dragons, they were playing their Naruto campaign, and in it, seeing as my friend is the master of the game, he said that they had to find four people in the village of the sand. you know that every place has to have a place where all the homosexuals hang out,(i have nothing against gays, hell i have many gay friends!! they give the best hugs!!) well one of the players, Jordan, had to go in to find the guy hiding there. So he goes in, and one of the guys comes up to him, and goes 'you want some home made homo erotic popcorn? it's the best.' it was silent for exactly 3 seconds before Jordan, said 'did you just say what i think you said?' and so Sean my friend, repeats himself, as soon as he said it, everybody just started laughing. it was so funny! i just thought you would get a good laugh from that. and yes i do feel better, and i am glad that the cold went through you already, so that you are immune to it. at least that's the way i think of it. mine was a mix of a normal cold and a head cold. sooo that drove me nutz.... my nose was runny one second, then stuffy the next.... literally!!! well i hope you write again soon. oh that reminds me... there's another song that i thought you might want to use in the story.... it's called if you still believe. it's the legend of dragoon theme song.

~Elehanna~

   swasdiva spacecataz25@yahoo.com 2007-10-09 ID: 931
WHHHHUUUAAAAATTTT??!??!?!!! NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE US LIKE THAT!!!!! Well... I mean...I guess you *can*....considering you're the author and all....BUT STILL!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Can you tell I simply adored this chapter? Honey, you get all the sniffles and take all the relaxing breaks you want. When you churn out romantic, palpable angst and tension like this, both in the past AND the future, I can wait forever for updates!!!! And darlin', Libras and Cancers must be sisters in laziness (if that's what you call it) cause I do the same thing when I'm sick. I take full advantage and then have the hardest time getting back in the swing of things. BTW, my little sister's a Cancer. Random! But back to what matters, I'm REALLY going to cry if this is the scene where Kuronue is kaput and Youko dies. I mean, seriously, my eyes are welling up as we speak. It's like a teary teaser trailer. Like I have sobs on preorder. Like I'm so PMSing and even the THOUGHT of another of my fave fictional characters kicking the proverbial bucket soon will throw me over the hormonal edge!!! I'm on the precipice of Pepper Spray Emotions!!!! (Sorry, I'm a huge, or *was* a huge Prison Break fan...dunno if you have that show where you are, as by some idioms I assume you're in the UK?...but they bumped off one of the show's best characters for absolutely no reason. I'm in denial, I tell you!) So yes....

Great chapter, even if I am wailing inside!!!!! I'm friggin' EMO right now!!!!!!! NNNOOOOOO!!!!!!!

   Elehanna Sesshys_girl06@hotmail.com 2007-11-23 ID: 944
i hope you update soon. so far i have found that you've been taking forever....lol. Anyway, i have never heard of M2M, are they on youtube? Perhaps, if you need inspiration, we could rp out a scene. I find that helps out a lot. If you want to, my email is already there, so go ahead and use it. I am usually rather good at rp-ing a character, so long as i know who the character is, and their attitude. My offer still stands at any time. I will also beta your story, if needed. Please remember that i am not trying to flame you, it is merely an offer. As a suggestion, perhaps Kuronue could meet Kagome some time soon?

For some reason, I feel as if I am stalking you.... I have no idea why. Anyway, I hope you update soon.


~Elehanna / Sesshys_girl06~( I go by both names....)

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